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Applying for a Promotion or New Job? Don't Make These Mistakes on Your Resume!

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Management Analyst
St. Louis
Wed Aug 8, 2007 7:52 AM

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The article addresses "keywords" taken from the "duties and responsibilities" area of job descriptions. Most people do not see the job description when applying for a position, they see the duties. If you are applying for more than one position you find listed, you can alter your resume on-line to select some words from the Duties section, however, those same keywords may not apply for another position you may apply for within that same time period. When the announcement closes, it will not be the resume you altered to included "keywords". In other words, you can see an announcement, update your resume, submit your resume by the closing date, then another position opens and you alter your resume AGAIN, the words from the previous announcement are now gone because you can only have one version of your resume. I have NOT made referral lists for positions because of this. Resumes should still be READ by a PERSON rather than letting the computer program predict a person's future.

USA APPLICATION

larry slater
ARMY HRS
Wed Aug 8, 2007 9:04 AM

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The only problem with his argument is that we are limited to 12000 characters for our job descriptions. OPM needs to increase the character amount.

Re: USA APPLICATION

HR specialist
retired
Wed Aug 8, 2007 11:25 AM
Resumes should not go on for pages. Trust me, too many words, many selecting officials will move on to the next application without reading everything you've written. Pare it down; you don't need to use long, compound sentences. As a matter of fact, you can probably skip using sentences altogether and just list your KSAs and achievements (results). You need to catch their attention. You can reel them in at the interview!

Keep the Objective

Supervisor
Defense
Wed Aug 8, 2007 11:04 AM

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The author said ditch the objective, I say keep it. I want to know what the person is interested in doing. I can hire someone to do what I want them to do. However, if it's not what they're interested in doing, they won't be around very long before they look for work that they are interested in.

Think of it as an application, not a resume

HR Specialist
VA
Wed Aug 8, 2007 2:15 PM

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The most important point to keep in mind is to be honest & open about your overall background & qualifications - not which "key words" or "buzzwords" to add in. It would help to think of the document - whether it's OF 612 or other - as an application specifically for Federal employment, NOT as your resume (which is your personal document to write, develop & format any way you choose). Let's face it - if Federal agencies could use actual resumes for hiring purposes, they'd ask for them; but resumes are generally not adequate for the invasive kind of personal information which must be considered before anyone can be appointed to a Government position. If you're NOT comfortable with providing this level of information, you're probably not suitable for employment in the Federal system.

Re: Think of it as an application, not a resume

Analyst
USDA
Thu Aug 9, 2007 8:42 AM
When was the last time you filled out an "application?" I see announcements for positions that require you to write out your entire life on paper. No one could possibly need that much information in order to consider a person for a job. I have sent out applications with information on them and when I am invited to an interview, I am told that "no one has had the time to read your application - can you provide the information verbally so that we don't have to read it? It has become totally ridiculous. That much information is not needed to determine if a person is suited for a position - private industry hires with a resume, why can't the government do it the same way? Seems like things are made hard and complicated when they don't have to be!

Re: Think of it as an application, not a resume

HR Specialist
VA
Thu Aug 9, 2007 6:01 PM
No one wants "your entire life on paper" - however, it IS necessary for Federal agencies to request a deeper level of personal information than what is standard on a resume. For one thing, the typical government application is an official document that requires your signature attesting to the accuracy of the info; your unsigned resume could be science fiction with the employer forced to take a "caveat emptor" approach. HR in a Fed agency must verify citizenship; veterans status; in some cases, scholastic grade point average; & always, security/sensitivity/suitability considerations. Further, the typical white-collar Federal job is heavily information-based. If an applicant is NOT comfortable sharing a certain level of personal information, for whatever reason, one could question how well-suited they would be to the information-related demands of the job. If you think the application process requires a lot of "stuff", wait until in-processing on the first day on the job.

Re: Think of it as an application, not a resume

HR Specialist
Federal Agency
Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:16 AM
One point I'd like to make here is this...when an HR specialist gets an application, they are determining your qualifications for the position. So let's say the job is advertised at multiple grades levels, you need to be sure that your application is detailed enough to ensure that you are determined to be qualified for all grade levels. And, you should always specify that you want to be considered for all grade levels eligible.

Why can't the Federal govt use a typical resume...well because we want to give you the highest grade possible...qualifications are determined based on (1) education alone, (2) experience alone unless the occupation has a positive education requirement, and/or (3) a combination of education and experience. It's in your best interest to include more detailed information. Otherwise the HR community may only be able to qualify you based solely on education which may be at a lower grade than you could have qualified for.

Re: Think of it as an application, not a resume

Analyst
USDA
Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:53 PM
Well, I just went on an interview. The long application that I had filled out had been condensed to just a few pages. The manager stated that he did not have time to read it, so if I did not mind, could I tell him about myself so that he did not have to read it. He played with his "Blackberry" during the interview. I was invited to the second round of interviews - but I must say that the first interview was the worst interview that I have ever had. The interviewer said that he did not know exactly what position, what the grade of the position was, what office, etc. He stated that he only know that there were some vacancies in some of the offices, but not which vacancies had been announced or the grade level of the available positions. So now when they call me back for the second interview, I will have to ask for what position and at what grade level. I know what I applied for, but have no idea of what I was interviewed for. My plans are to decline the second interview.

Re: Think of it as an application, not a resume

Analyst
USDA
Thu Aug 16, 2007 1:05 PM
To HR Spec., VA - in the real world that does not happen. If you check all of the information on an application, why do you turn around and ask again? If you verify my citizenship, why am I required more than once to prove that I am a citizen? I think the process is more about endurance.....can I put you through the wringer and still keep your interest in a Federal job. And why once a person is in the Federal workforce, should they have to go through the process over and over again if they want to move to another Federal agency? It just does not make sense - the initial hiring process may possibly have to involve a little more, but once in Federal employment it should all be streamlined. The Federal Government is losing out on the best and the brightest because of this ridiculous process of Federal hiring. Work smarter, not harder!

Re: Think of it as an application, not a resume

HR Specialist
Federal Agency
Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:42 AM
To Analyst, USDA...I personally do not believe all that bunk about the federal government losing out on the best and brightest.

In terms of once in the system, you should already have a good resume to use and then just be able to apply and address any questions asked. Why should the process be different? It's a COMPETITIVE hiring process which means that applicants both internal and external have to compete. Be glad that some agencies still make people compete...my agency is just giving promotions away to people while others who could do the job never get a chance to compete for it.

length

unemployed
ephra
Thu Aug 9, 2007 5:07 PM

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How many pages should your resume be?

Re: length

HR Specialist
Federal Agency
Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:43 AM
As long as you feel it needs to be. There is no page limit on the Federal resume. Just keep in mind that the reader may lose interest if you ramble on and on and on...

Re: length

Consultant
none
Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:39 AM
Your resume should be of adequate lenght to discuss work that is relevant to the job you're applying for. If you're applying for a relatively low level position (GS-7 equivalent or below), or a position with straighforward requirements (e.g., non-management), or you lack experience, probably two pages max. If you are applying for a more complex job, try to limit your description of previous work to two pages, with bullet point lists or tables, and accomplishments/pubs on a separate page. List all jobs held but only relevant skills & duties. Include all education, and relevant training.

Don't exaggerate your duties or use jargon. This only irritates federal staffing specialists.

And some federal applications do have page/word/character limits - at least those submitted electronically.

some of these are fishy

Consultant
none
Mon Nov 24, 2008 10:00 AM

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I disagree with a couple of these. When I look at a resume, I want to see evidence of skills - not claims. I don't want to have someone tell me they know budgeting, I want to know that they actually managed a budget for several years. I would much rather see responsibilities than claims of skills.

I also prefer an objective to a career summary. Career summaries are only relevant to high level positions, and typically if someone is changing jobs at that stager in life they want a different direction. So I do care what people want, because I don't want to hire someone that is going to quit in 6 months.

So do you have any evidence to back up these claims? Do these recommendations lead to better hiring decisions, or are they actually rated better by HR specialists?

Confused

Office Automation Assistant
Small Busines Administration
Tue Feb 10, 2009 12:13 PM

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After reading the article I thought I was ready to began upgrading my resume'; but after reading the comments from HR and supervisors, I'm not sure what human resource or management is looking for in a resume'.

I'll review all comments again and incorporate the suggestions into my resume.

Thank you

Re: Confused

HR Specialist
VA
Wed Feb 11, 2009 10:24 AM
Admittedly, you get some conflicting answers. If I could offer one piece of advice to anyone, it would be to put the word "resume" out of your mind; resumes are intended largely for private-sector employment. The word "resume" is used a lot in government circles because it is politically correct; it sounds good, i.e. like something private enterprise does & therefore something to be emulated by govt. In reality, no one gets hired in the Fed without completing some laborious government form, then completing more forms processing in on the first day of work. If in doubt about how much info to provide, I would add in whatever you think might be applicable. It's easier for HR and selecting officials to ignore what they don't need than to request info which was omitted.
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